From a character design assignment. I somewhat like it but I think it can be better, The two characters on the right need to be simplified, and the characters on the left need to be re-invented.
WOW, i really like these designs! It's very fresh to see a non-bland (i.e. Disney) female protagonist, assuming this is for an animated feature of some kind. I think the dudes on the right are fine. Give the guy on the left a little less detail and a little more negative space in his face, and you'll be fine.
Eeesh! That villain is scary and creepy looking! I totally dig it, though. You must love that short guy -- he keeps popping up in your stories! GREAT lines Amir. GREAT designs, too. You never disappoint, bud!
amir, i wouldnt change the two on the left, they are great as they are man. so are the two on the right, pretty much the whole thing is great man keep it up.
From a character design assignment. I somewhat like it but I think it can be better, The two characters on the right need to be simplified, and the characters on the left need to be re-invented.
WOW, i really like these designs! It's very fresh to see a non-bland (i.e. Disney) female protagonist, assuming this is for an animated feature of some kind. I think the dudes on the right are fine. Give the guy on the left a little less detail and a little more negative space in his face, and you'll be fine.
ReplyDeleteNice construction and design!
ReplyDeleteCool to see some of youre school work.
Great design!I really like your work and blog.
ReplyDeleteThanks folks!
ReplyDeleteYour advice is good Nico,
I think that now I need to step back and make functional changes to improve readability.
Eeesh! That villain is scary and creepy looking! I totally dig it, though. You must love that short guy -- he keeps popping up in your stories! GREAT lines Amir. GREAT designs, too. You never disappoint, bud!
ReplyDeleteG'day Amir,
ReplyDeleteGreat stuff that villian is cool and lucky bugger with those John K pics.
Thanks for your comment too cheers.
amir, i wouldnt change the two on the left, they are great as they are man. so are the two on the right, pretty much the whole thing is great man keep it up.
ReplyDeleteGreat work. It was nice meeting you. Put me up on my links if you'd like.
ReplyDeleteAlways good to stop by and see that your passion for your work continues to grow!
ReplyDeleteGreat stuff, Amir. Wait a minute, is that little guy handing the cowboy a pipe???
ReplyDeleteGlad you like it Melissa!
ReplyDeleteThe sidekick is giving the cowboy a stick he has asked him to fetch, I'll show you the story sometime