Also, your movement lines should be more confident!
Make it really look like those limbs are moving around! Panel number four is really funny, but it could have been punched up a lot with some action lines of the wife swinging her butt, and with the husband leaning more away (right now, he's just kind of straight up and down).
THESE ARE SO FUNNY! I love the expressions, I love the drawings! Panel two has a beautiful hand. Eleven is really funny, Six is my favorite.
Fourteen is really awesome. haha
Hilarious, Amir!! And SO well done! I can't wait for more!! :D
Hahaha, Grinch face :p Great stuff man!
ReplyDeletei love your drawings.
ReplyDeleteThese expressions are awesome!
ReplyDeleteThanks Mel, Nico and Looney, glad you dig!
ReplyDeleteThese are fantastic drawings!!!
ReplyDeleteThey are perfect and super cartoony! I also like your poses and face expressions!=)
Great story. I've never been here before, but I love the style. Very creative.
ReplyDeletePeace,
Joe y ELio
HAHAHA HILARIOUS!!
ReplyDeleteI think they need definitive borders, though.
Also, your movement lines should be more confident!
Make it really look like those limbs are moving around! Panel number four is really funny, but it could have been punched up a lot with some action lines of the wife swinging her butt, and with the husband leaning more away (right now, he's just kind of straight up and down).
THESE ARE SO FUNNY! I love the expressions, I love the drawings! Panel two has a beautiful hand. Eleven is really funny, Six is my favorite.
Fourteen is really awesome. haha
Hilarious, Amir!! And SO well done! I can't wait for more!! :D
Great work man, really nice stuff. Keep it up!
ReplyDeleteR.
Wow, I love this! Great style, really fluid, dynamic and cartoony! There's a fantastic sense of movement in every panel. Can't wait to see more.
ReplyDeletelol these are wikid man, there is so much movement in every pannel, the designs are so great too. your so good man, have a good summer
ReplyDeleteThanks Joe&Elio, Mitch, Randeep, Dragan and Dan, I enjoyed reading your comments.
ReplyDeleteOh! I forgot Steffi! :p
ReplyDeleteI'm really glad you liked it, it means a lot coming from you! =)
Amir, Awesome comic strip--VERY FUNNY!!!
ReplyDeleteLooking forward to future volumes.
Nice line of action on drawing 14.
ReplyDeleteCool! I like how the characters interact with each other.
ReplyDeleteNice and curvy, just how I like it.
ReplyDeleteWicked!
ReplyDeleteLove it ^_^