Friday, April 11, 2008

Character Lineup

From a character design assignment. I somewhat like it but I think it can be better, The two characters on the right need to be simplified, and the characters on the left need to be re-invented.

11 comments:

Nico said...

WOW, i really like these designs! It's very fresh to see a non-bland (i.e. Disney) female protagonist, assuming this is for an animated feature of some kind. I think the dudes on the right are fine. Give the guy on the left a little less detail and a little more negative space in his face, and you'll be fine.

Mitch L said...

Nice construction and design!
Cool to see some of youre school work.

Alex said...

Great design!I really like your work and blog.

amir avni said...

Thanks folks!

Your advice is good Nico,
I think that now I need to step back and make functional changes to improve readability.

Mitch K said...

Eeesh! That villain is scary and creepy looking! I totally dig it, though. You must love that short guy -- he keeps popping up in your stories! GREAT lines Amir. GREAT designs, too. You never disappoint, bud!

Hryma said...

G'day Amir,
Great stuff that villian is cool and lucky bugger with those John K pics.
Thanks for your comment too cheers.

danSEDDON said...

amir, i wouldnt change the two on the left, they are great as they are man. so are the two on the right, pretty much the whole thing is great man keep it up.

Scott said...

Great work. It was nice meeting you. Put me up on my links if you'd like.

ENZO AVOLIO said...

Always good to stop by and see that your passion for your work continues to grow!

Mel Maduro said...

Great stuff, Amir. Wait a minute, is that little guy handing the cowboy a pipe???

amir avni said...

Glad you like it Melissa!

The sidekick is giving the cowboy a stick he has asked him to fetch, I'll show you the story sometime